Short and got right to the point. i liked it alot. good choice of words

The last line is very beautiful and creates a lovely image. I'm sorry, i forgot to write in My Challenge that if you attempt I will r/r/c on 2 of your poems.
but you do not know the why, when, or how
i suggest you get rid of 'the'.
nice poem, the idea was well done, the rymeing scheme was great, and the structure was unique. good job, 4/5

Whoah.... that was so amazing. just by reading one piece, i can already tell your an awesome poet. 5/5 also, its all completely true

Love the emotion you put into this one, I'll have to give you a 5!

I Loved It Loved It Loved It! What More Can I Say Than 5.0?...This Poem Burst With Talent And Skill, I Can Tell That You Write From The Heart *Hugs* *Friends For Life* 5/5 All The Way! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo