Oh my gosh! that poem was so well written, it was breathtaking, i hope you don't really feel like that but oh my it was just so good! Each line had me on the edge of my seat, reading and reading wanting there to be more, caught my interest very easily and I felt the emotion you put into this poem, it truely was absoultley remarkable, take care and keep writing, you did a fabulous job on this one and definatley deserve a 5/5.