by Poetic Tragedy08 Aug 29, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
It's a song, so it might not fit your poets eyes. And ya, I know it's short! |
Very touching, i can understand songs more so then anything else.. wish i could actually hear how its suspose to go, anyway good job, 5/5 |
Great job. I've written a few songs myself and this one flows very nicely. There is a steady rhythm to it, making it easy to perform. It's a little short, but it's fine. |
by Lithium
Thats really good, i'm a slight songwriter myself and from my point of veiw its quit well wrote xox fallen |
by Kayla
Wow this was good i liked it....a few rough areas but hey...i cant judge since it might go with the way you sing it....lol...so yea thanks for the comments on my poems...luv yas mwah |
by Amanda..*
Love it.. =) |