Dunno

by Morbid_reflection   Aug 29, 2005


Death in her thoughts
a smile on her face
a big group of friends
but no proper place

a superficial like
she makes seem realistic
the causes her so much strife
makes her feel ballistic

as her feelings swell
so do her tears
but she keeps it all hidden
that and her fears

feelings of happiness
pushed to the bottom
there they will stay
rot and forgotten.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade Lies

    My friend and I can relate so well to that, if you ever need someone to talk to I am always here xxbashful_babydxx@yahoo.com

  • 19 years ago

    by Ruby

    I really liked that, great flow and nice word usage...
    keep going and it'll get better, feel free to talk if you need 2...:)
    take care
    xox
    ruby

  • 19 years ago

    by ~~PaRtY-gAl~~

    Hey..dat was reali gud.......i can reali see were u r coming from

  • 19 years ago

    by TheDevilHimself

    Oh, i think its a gud one:D, i like it, go on with writing, huggels R

  • 19 years ago

    by Caroline

    Wow I really like this poem, hope everythings ok and things get better.

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