Gaven up

by Morbid_reflection   Aug 29, 2005


I try and i try
to please everyone
sometimes my efforts are worthwhile
but some people have given up all hope
i built my walls back up again
it took time, yes but it was worth it for
two days of pure happiness.
but everyday another bit crumbles,
i cant feel anything
but worthless
what is the point?

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  • 19 years ago

    by TheDevilHimself

    That was a gud poem, yay, huggles ya. huhhahahahaha, hyper!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Void

    Hey amie, I have read a few and you always seem so sad. I can relate to them though, and I hate thinking that anyone else in the world has to feel that way. Just keep going no matter how pointless it seems. Good luck in everything, I know we've only been talking a while but you're a good friend to me. I have hope, faith and encourage you to do what you can to stay happy. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by John Bender

    Good write! I hope to hear from you.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~~PaRtY-gAl~~

    Hey...dat poem was gud..i realy lyked it
    keep up da gud work alrite.....~~$hOrTy~~

  • 19 years ago

    by David McIntosh

    Ive been there, Nice write

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