by ZOMGEMO Aug 29, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
My pen to my paper, is like a blade to my skin, |
I really enjoyed this piece, the flow could use a little tightening in spots, but I thought it was great none the less. I am the same, writing is my outlet, so it really spoke to me. Nice work. |
Fantastic..wow..you never seem to stop amazing me with your wonderful talent..i love ya work hunni |
I LOVE the poem, it flows so smoothly and rhymes perfectly. |
by Kendall
AWESOME! |