Hm, that was intense. ^Haha, that girl called you insane. Thats brilliant. But it does creep a bit of insanity in it. Usually when people are insane though, they say they arent over and over again to reasure themselves. That wasnt really done in your poem..so therefor its not a fact. Unless you have been withholding information about yourself!?!?! Hm..anyways, that was really well written. Good work ole' Pal.

-Jennifer.

Thats awusome, you did a great job on it +_-

This is defiantly one of my favorites written by you. Deserves nothing less than a 5/5.

Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne