That's pretty powerful, Nicole. I know what you told me before I read it, but that doesn't stop me from wanting to cry. Its a really good poem. I think the length being so short on this one is good, bcuz its to the point. You draw everyone in, and then you still have them gripping the mouse tight by the time they finish. Awesome poem, I love ya girlie! never Give up on writing, Im NOT GONE!!! Im gonna post my poems on a different site, until its safe for me to come back, so You can still read them while I'm not on here. I will still Come on and comment and rate your poems, tho. Just cuz Im the best and i love ya!
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Love always,
Lynz

Love dis poem,lots!!!!!!!!!