Determined

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Aug 29, 2005


Looking at the long road that lies ahead, hesitating.
Stretched to it's full length, it patiently waits.
Leaves decorate the lonely sidewalks, motionless.
Darkness begins to fall as shadows dance in the distance.

Loneliness settles in, as I begin to walk the paved road.
The light breeze sends shivers down my spine,
Yet I continue my way, determined to get to the other side.
Determined to make it on my own, escaping reality.

The wind gently urges me to move forward.
It's push gives me courage to continue my way.
Determined to finish the long road that lies ahead.
Determined, but I still have a long long way to go.

© Fighter

*not my best, I know.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Maybe not your best but still better than anything i could ever dream up. take care hun xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    It May not be your best but its better then what I can do hun:)Keep up the great work, stay strong I cant wait for a another new poem

    Love always
    Jennx0x0x