Hey, this is awesome really powerful i love it keep it up 5/5

Wow :) that is very good keep it up and ull be a poem riter in no time:)

I like it its cool by the way thank you for commenting my poem

Well done beth this is lovely 5/5 :)

Lovely poem. Tragic, and very powerful. Great job. REad some of mine if you get time, aye?