Very nice, definitely one of your best poems i have read yet, and how true it is

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I like this, it's really good. the ryming scheme is great and it flows naturaly. i enjoy the subject as well.5/5

Very nice, Dandy! Th flow was magnificent and the poem was unique. I really enjoyed this one. Terrific write!

"Turning turning turning through the years...minutes into hours and hours into years," eh? Good stuff. Little deviation from your normal writing, but just as good