That was really sad. i know the feeling of hating your dad and how mad they make you and no matter how hard you try, words still cant express it fully. brilliant poem 5/5...take care, love always liv xx

Hey u have some awsome poems
im new to this site but u should check out mine see if u like them

Wow... this poem... I can't even express how much it touched me. My dad beats me... and my best friend's guardians used to beat him too. I know how hard it is to stand up to a father... especially one who uses verbal abuse. If you ever wanna talk, my email address is neko_no_ongaeshi@hotmail.com. *hugs* Bye...

That was a really great poem.

*Blood Shot Eyes*

WOW that is a GREAT poem is it real?? if it is im SOO SORRY that you had to go threw all that i hope its over with and the sun of a b**** is in forever n you have moved on with your life much love to you always alana

Very good--i really like it dont ever stop writing!!

Wow this is such a good poem, im so sorry all this is happening to you, but i hope that one day everything will be ok. hang in there. xxxx

Exellent!! 5/5 I love your writting Keep up the great work, Hope everything is alright at home now!!!
Lots O' Love
BloodRdRose

Omg!!! i am on total shock.......i cannot believe some of the ways ppl act in his world it makes me wonder where this world is heading......
good job....
F.N.O

Well
i kinda know how ya fell
great job
i cant realte witch makes it BETTER
5/5 !

Love it

God reading this poem is liek reading something right from my soul...my dad "beat" me once, I moved in with my mom and older brother. Since then I've cried many tears and made many scars. Absolutely incredible poem.

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

Wow u are like a really good writer ur heart and soul is into it and thats what makes it sooo good
5/5

WOW!! honestly im speachless!! what can i say u have some wonderful poems!!!