Castle in the Sky

by May   Aug 29, 2005


I built my whole world
around you.
And when you left,
my whole world came crashing down.
With every word and ever touch,
you made me believe in our love so much.
I built our castle in the sky.
I built it higher with every lie.
You gave me comfort;
you spoke so sweet.
I gave you my whole heart,
with every single beat.
I'm not saying you didn't treat me good,
I'm just saying
you didn't stay as long as you should.

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  • 19 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Holy cow... I think this is one of my favorite poems. You expressed the emotion really good, and I love the choice of words. Great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Cheryl

    LOVE IT!!! total 5/5 in my book girl
    later,
    cheryl

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