Hey nathan i really like your poem. i also have a few poems i would really enjoy your opinion! Heaven? and Beauty are them hope you leave me a coment .. keep it up! lindy

I enjoyed this. I liked the imagery you created. "The smell of bacon
As its fresh on the griddle
The sound of the fire
Burning right down the middle..." I could actually envision it. Nice job:) Oh, but you need to put a space between "chirpsof" in the first line.