I like it a lot, do you have a sn or myspace or something? .... i give it a 5..

Similar ending to "death." Good work. I wonder have you experienced death(s) or just like writing about it?

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Hey i hope that you are the one I talked to but any way i really like it it sounds like a lot of the poems that i used to write

5/5 very nice!!....also very scary.....but nice! :)