by samara Aug 30, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I'm not here for your disposal |
by lindzy
That is quite inspirational, i love the raw emotion in the poem, it really gets your point across, which is very important while writing poetry, well at least i think so lolz. one quick, small note, the line "I'm not here because you love me, fore i know thats no longer true" should probably be 'for' instead, but other than that a pretty damn good job, you should be proud of yourself. |