You

by Hard2Heal   Aug 30, 2005


Every time i say goodbye
It stabs me in the heart
i don't know how i continue to live
when we have to be apart.

You make me laugh
you make me smile
you make every day i live
all the more worth while

i long for your touch
every single night
i long for you arms
to hold me so tight

you pull me out of my darkest days
and fight away my fears
and if for some reason i begin to cry
you wipe away my tears

i look at you and smile
for i know that it is true
that with every breath you take from me
i fall more in love with you

and if for some reason
we end up growing apart
just know you will always have a special place,
right here in my heart.

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  • 19 years ago

    by þŗ℮††ỵ ġįŗłş мåk℮ ġŗåv℮ş. ♥ ××

    Oh very cute =) i love this piece of work... it was great. keep it up xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    This poem is riddled with cliches, such as

    i long for your touch
    every single night
    i long for you arms
    to hold me so tight

    you pull me out of my darkest days
    and fight away my fears
    and if for some reason i begin to cry
    you wipe away my tears

    basically all of that.. aside from the cliches, this is a decent piece.. it is heartfelt, true, but it would be much better to express it in a way different than most people have. more entertaining as well.. admittedly, ive fallen into the cliche "boat" as well, but i realized that i didnt like sounding like everyone else,.. i wanna distinguish myself.. so in writing about cliche ideas, i actually strengthened my writing.. i dunn0 if that makes sense or provides ne help, but yea.. this is by no means a bad piece of writing,.. i just dont think u can go wrong when ur writing feelings so obviously heartfelt, but it would certainly spice it up and make it more appealing if it was less cliche.. just some thoughts.. pZ out

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