This poem was done by my brother when he was in grade nine. It is an amazing poem and after six years of hearing about it. We were cleaning out somethings and found this poem.. i was really suprised..it actually has given me new life. The way a poem should. It is truely something amazing in my opinion.

Although everything is pointless, that was much better than any of the other crud that flies around here. I give it 5/5. By the way, How do ya join this club? It sounds like my kinda place.

Awww it's so0o0o0o0o cute i love it! it's really sweet! is it your lil brother your talking about?

Adorable!

Aww that p0em is s0 beautiful! y0ur br0ther sh0uld be very pr0ud 0f himself, he sh0ws al0t 0f talent, just like y0u. a very sweet p0em!
l0ve maddy x0ox

Aww.. this is soo cute.. great flow and rhyme scheme.. short and simple but still powerful.. good work!

I have a little sister that i feel the same way about....she is 9 years old now....i remember the day she was born, she lit up my whole world....she doesn't even know how special she truely is :)
this was a really good poem...your brother is a very good writer....give him props for me

This poem is so cute...hahah i like the part where he wrote:
He threatens your toes with his tractor wheels...kindda reminds me of my lil cuzzins play with their toy car while threatening my toes hahah...indeed ur brother has done a great job;)

I had to leave a comment here!! it's just to adorable , sweet n lovely!!! it made go oooooooooooo!!! n reminded me of my little brothers :P he sounds as a great writer n a greater brother! tc

Hmm, I like this poem it is kind of sweet and cute. It is a good description of what little kids are like. 5/5

Ahh..this was truly a sweet poem. Captured the essense of what mixed feelings we have for the small ones.. one minute we hate that they irritate us and ruin our things, and the next minute they can melt us with just one little smile..

Awww.. I loved this, it was so cute. It really brought out the childish behavior everyone loves in kids, really cute. Your brother has talent, he did a good job.
^^
*Chaotic Angel*

I love it :]
really cute.

Wow that was an awesome poem. I wish I had a little brother that I was that proud of.

First off, thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. :)
I loved this poem! I'm the oldest of 5 children so I can relate well to this! lol Tell your brother great job! ;)
Hopeless Romantic