Spinning on the axis of intoxication
its spreading the decay of imagination
ask; why not surrender to the isolation
there is no need to feel this obligation
Ilike that! very imaginative!
This is very strong, and i understand the subject, and the element, but it still seems rather vauge. 4/5

This is an excellent poem. well writin and well put together. is it based on events from your life, or where did the ideas from this poem come from?
~Hard2Heal

The title in itself deserves a 5/5 you know how to put the right words together and make them sound super cool i loved the idea of the poem im just assuming its about drugs unless its some metaphor but i know alot of drug addicts and its a scary thing so if this was you at a point im sorry but i think that this is a great topic to write about and as it is common you made it unique great job