In doubt

by Genna   Aug 30, 2005


Sometimes everything seems so shaky
My whole world crumbles down
Always full of maybes
Faith starts to drown

Other times it seems so good
We are together, you and I
Together as we should
But then it all becomes a lie

You leave, I stay
You go, I cry
Another day
Just gone by

How will I hold it out
How will I make it
When I'm in so much doubt

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  • 19 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Thanks for the comments you left on some of my poems! i really liked this one, it flowed really nicely! i'l b reading your others ones! keep it up =) jesxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heidi

    Awee thanks for the comment =) and the poems that you write are very good ... I love them, keep it upp =D

    *Heidi

  • 19 years ago

    by matt white

    Thanks for the comment...that was an awesome poem ya she like just broke up with me the other day and well the weird thing is she told me she loved the other night...she told me she loved while she did it why do you break up with some one you love...she said she had to many problems ni her life to balance what we had and the problems...she said i was a perfect boyfriend...so why am i being punished for a crime i did not commit...

    --matt--

  • 19 years ago

    by Genna

    Thanks, it actually didnt take me that long. I wrote it during a meeting. If all your thoughts finds words it just goes witht the flow. Then its easy writing what you feel. glad you like it. Will look for you poems.