Thanks, it actually didnt take me that long. I wrote it during a meeting. If all your thoughts finds words it just goes witht the flow. Then its easy writing what you feel. glad you like it. Will look for you poems.

Thanks for the comment...that was an awesome poem ya she like just broke up with me the other day and well the weird thing is she told me she loved the other night...she told me she loved while she did it why do you break up with some one you love...she said she had to many problems ni her life to balance what we had and the problems...she said i was a perfect boyfriend...so why am i being punished for a crime i did not commit...

--matt--

Awee thanks for the comment =) and the poems that you write are very good ... I love them, keep it upp =D

*Heidi

Thanks for the comments you left on some of my poems! i really liked this one, it flowed really nicely! i'l b reading your others ones! keep it up =) jesxx