Without you

by Marissa   Aug 30, 2005


Without you my life is empty and dark,
I feel like someone took my air to breath, my reason to live!

I see no reason why i should go out of bed... why to brush my teeth or why i should meet a friend, when the only one i was living for is gone!

It's like someone pushed me from a cliff and I am falling down with no hold or safety! The reason why i bared all the pain I had went away and won't come back!

I can't feel a thing, only pain, the love pleasure and tenderness has gone and won't come back..- like you!

You were my world, my reason to go on, my family and house. You gave me the strength to go on, even if the situation seemed hopeless.

My heart was just beating for you, , now the only thing i can do is cry! My feelings seem to be deaf and my heart seems to be blind, because it's not any more able to see the good things in life!

But you just went away, you left me alone and i don't know how to go on! What to do when I will fall on the ground? What can I say when the only thing I feel is pain? The answers for all the questions is you, but you don't care!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nee

    Heeey sweetie :D
    great poem and a good choice of words :D
    but you know what..you should change the it like sentences under each other and dont write like a letter..i hope you get me
    anyway great poem and i'm here to help if you fell into the ground :)
    never give up hope
    take care and keep goin
    lov ya
    Nema
    XxXxXxX

  • 19 years ago

    by brit

    You're a really good writer girl...keep em coming :P

  • 19 years ago

    by Mike Johnson

    I like this, mostly because I have been feeling about the same lately. I like how honest and straight-forward you are. "The answers for all the questions is you, but you don't care" - Great.

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