Beautiful

Be yourself, its the most you can do, and you will be so much better as yourself, I am sure many of us wish we could shed our skin like the snake alas we are all stuck as ourselves and I am sure no one is completely happy about it, however, make the most of being yourself, you are your own person, special in different ways to those you envy, you have talent, this was another good flowing and well structured poem, well done to you

take care
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This one kinda confused me a bit...i read it 3 times and i cant grasp the meaning....definetly not one of your best pieces although you are quite talented and have your own unique sence....keep it up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-