by SweetSuicide
Amazing poem..5/5 |
by katie!
Another good piece, those tears can feel so real and you are so convinced they are there, then there is nothing, I know the feeling, you described the feeling very well I think, the format and structure of the poem was good and the flow wasn't disrupted anywhere which kept me interested in reading the next line, good poem, well done to you... |
by Kayla
I liked this one...it was unique....nice job 5/5 luv yas mwah |
by miracle
It is so beautiful.. i like it so much |
by fallentears
Great poem i can really relate to it |