by Drew Gold Aug 30, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Day in and day out. |
by prepkiller
"he found a way in, |
by Hard2Heal
Oh wow! thats a sad ( but very good ) poem!! i enjoy your writing so much. its very origional. whenever i read your stuff, i always expect the unexpected, and i suppose thats a good thing. keep up the amazing work! :-) |
by Lenny
I think I already commented on this one but i read it again, and enjoyed it immensly the second time around |
by Kayla
Wow amazing poem....5/5 nice work....wonderful....luv yas mwah |
Wonderful! my only suggestion is to try and do stanzas, the first was a lil shaky, but you ended it pretty good, so definately a 5/5!! |