Flower

by mesolithic   Aug 30, 2005


Make a flower,
for me,
would you make a flower,
give it to me,
ever?

would you take a flower ,
name it mine,
take a flower,
leave it here,
would you do that for me?

would you return that flower,
that you made for me,
waste the fvcking power,
just for me,
ever?

would you kill a flower,
against my will,
but do it for me,
if i asked you to,
never?

would you change for me,
make it for me,
break it for me,
kill it for me?

i watch you shake your head,
in reply,
too much to ask,
or is it me,
only a flower,
i just want a flower,
too much for you,
too much to lose,
a special fvcking flower.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Spam

    Well done by the way!

  • 19 years ago

    by Spam

    Good gracious rummi! never heard anything like this! it rhymes but it doesn't, it makes sence but it doesn't, it's about a rose i presume? and when you say "would you kill it" does that mean "would you kill our love for me?" or something different? and maybe, when you say, make a flower for me, does that mean like, nurture and grow love or something? like saying, would you grow love for me, and would you kill for love? it's almost as if you're putting everything on the line for this person (a girl i hope! :) ) and getting everything chucked right back at you. is that what you were trying to acheive? or did u just pick up a pen and start writing?

    x-pammie-x

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