Wow thats great. 5/5

This was pretty strong thru and thru,.. the quality seemingly going up and down in the middle, and then at the end,.. i dont get what the music is.. it's somewhat unfinished, so i might attribute it to this,.. but im not sure, might be something i failed to perceive.. sad story of being alone, but with much resolve at the end.. i wonder if you really experienced this, is it from pure imagination, or a mixture of both.. truly a great read, as with all your others.. strong elements are teeming within this piece, and you captured them so vividly.. honest 5/5

Terrific job, Rasmus. This has such a sad feeling the whole way through. My favorite part was : "Cold and wet, I huddle, and wait
for the coming peace, my final fate.
Bound to die in the empty street,
I try to cry, but lack strength to weep..."
Great job:)

This is a really amazing poem, good job 5/5

I've read some of your other poems and this one is my favorite out of all, from begining to end. Outstanding job...keep up the good work! I'll be around to read more. take care

This was a amazing poem i really like the last stanza and i loved how you put an amotsphere to the setting great poe
take care
HS