My razor's release

by myxlittlexcut   Aug 30, 2005


My eyes will forever remain
empty, cold, and dry
there is too much pain
and not enough tears to cry

my head is pounding
building up suppressed screams
so many words wish to flow out
but speaking is harder then it seems

my hands are now shaking
nothing can calm my nerves
clutching a razor tightly
knowing the purpose it will serve

the blood will flow as tears
easing the pressure in my mind
this razor blade will speak now
the words i couldn't find

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Love this poem, love this line the most:this razor blade will speak now
    the words i couldn't find

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    Wow, there is so much emotion in your poem. It's truly amazing. Great work. I love the last stanza. [[it's my favorite]]

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Thats really awesome!! i get wut point ur trying to get across so well...keep writing...thx for ur comments..
    lots of love,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Br0k3N

    This poem is really good

    definatly a 5

    keep writing ur very good at it

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Amazing..just amazing..there's nothing else to say except for that it is truely inspirational!!!!

    xxxx

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