I absolutly love this poem, there were so many lines that stuck out to me that i can't even begin listing them off. it's so sad and makes me feel like i am there from the discription. it's amazing from what i saw in the poem and read. it's just beautiful. i love the last two lines about the angel, i really love angels but the poem won me over long before i read those two lines. the first four lines were enough to win me over with this one.

"Ashes of the fallen are falling softly to the ground
Grey snow littering the streets, dulling the lights " those were the lines that captured me into it!

"Charring the grass which was already bloodstained" already bloodstained... so powerful and makes the reader realize that battle has been there and continues it's so sad!

"Foxgloves punch their way through the layer of tears
Poisonous flowers deceptive with beauty, colour
Marring the battlefields, making the honour " it's just... WOW.

and then of course the angel lines too! great job.

~Jacklyn

It's a great poem.... and very scary.