My Fantasy

by amber   Aug 30, 2005


In my fantasy of rainbows and roses.
Unicorns jumping delightfully.
My starfilled fantasy of the sun lighting up your face and caressing your skin.
Love is perfect.
We can be together.
In a fantasy place where our love bonds us together. When the music of the nights joins our passion as our bodies entwine.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    A lovely poem of a lovely fantasy I would have laid it out a little diffrently a couple of short stanzas I belive would have made it flow better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    A lovely poem of a lovely fantasy I would have laid it out a little diffrently a couple of short stanzas I belive would have made it flow better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Raven

    O........M.........G
    This poem was AMAZING
    This is my facorite one.
    You did extremely well on this
    LOVE IT

    ♥Mz.Raven

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Good but need s a structure. It's decent though when it comes to what you're trying to say

  • 19 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Not a poem at all but amazing work of putting these words in but mmm very deep i would also have to agree with Sarah on that. You did an amazing job i'll give you a 5. keep it up. keep on writing love always and forever

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