Wow very good..touching in a way lol..well u already know i think ur an awesome writer...5 all the way baby lol..keep it up
take care,

You do write very nicely I like, very deep with your emotions and not afraid to let them out

Hey sxy itz frekles.... lol lol... neway i luur songz..... all of the 1s iv read. neway we need 2 catch up agin soon. bye an i gav this a 5/5