Hey great poem, keep it up

Wow.. really good poem... i really loved the flow u have there..
ur rele good..
hope everythings okay hunn
if u need a person to talk to u can always talk to me..
if u have the time.. could u check out my poems and tell me maybe how i could improve??
thanx
once again great poem u have
5/5 =)
stay strong

Wow
your really talented
great job
take care x0x0

Oi u, dint notice this poem! Sorry. Don't think you are alone - ever- ok? You got me and i got u right??? I'm scared cos my life has been turned upside down and i can't cope! Be strong for me please hun :)

End of 2nd stanza, why would you wanna be the person who makes themselves bleed?? that's how you wrote it, or maybe i just have a bad sense of interpretation. well this poem shows heartfelt emotion, and depression. things will get better

There's so much emotion in it, and i can totally relate to it, but as time pass by, you will see that you live a great life after all. 5/5.

Wow thats all i can describe it with that poem is just so true 5/5

Thank you for liking my poem.. i also liked your poem very much..

Cool poem...the rhyming isnt in order but it makes it sounds better..haha...funky..keep it up:D

Very solidly conveyed. Well done indeed.

Great job... you are definitely a good poet.. i hope that you arent this lost in depression... thats not something anyone should have to go through... let me know if you need someone... to talk to or whatever... im a good listener..
take care
amanda

I felt the same way before.
This poem is great, like always. You got your emotions out very well and kept the flow of the poem while doing it well done!

Stay strong!! Please?

xxx

Very sad. im sorry that u hold that dark depression inside. the poem was great though, I liked how it was almost sarcastic for a minute there.

Good Writing!
beth

Awsome poem! I love the form and flow of it! Keep it up! :)

I like your poems, but everything seems to be based on depression and cutting.

You're an excellent writer, maybe you can pick another topic?

My favourite stanza were:

"I can write you a letter and make you read
about the times I made myself bleed
would that make you see the real me
or show you the person I want to be"

Especially the last two lines.

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Its great...!! sometimes i do feel like doing the things mentioned in your poem..!! but you see...im scared of pain...anyways! great poem!

Awesome poem and sry about the chick who stole ur other poem thats messed up lol i think some ppl just do that cuz they cant wright there own poems

WOW IT'S IT JUST HOW I AM FEELING! LIKE IF I'M THINKING THIS AND YOU ARE WRITING IT WOW! I HOPE I CAN GET TO WRITE LIKE YOU! PLEASE IF YOU CAN CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEMS AND GIVE ME ADVICE I KNOW I NEED IT!

One of my x-boyfriends told me a story just like your you just have to find your purpose in life and live with it.....

I really liked this one. It flowed very well and the rhyme scheme was simple yet effective. I love the way its almost a plea to someone who couldnt understand- its very real.