Amazing!!! im glad you're over your fear of singing the national anthem :D keep up the great work!
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Very good David.I wasn't there to hear you sing it but people tell me you were good.well lataz

Wow, Truely unique and original! Its a cool Idea, not a over used idea. (or should I say ever used?) The flow was really goood and I enjoyed reading it, after reading a bucket load of depresing poems I really liked this one! well done keep it up x)