Wow! This poem is so powerful. I have no family or friends that live in that area of the states, and its easy to look at it as a completly unpersonal thing. But reading your poem helped me realise just how personal it is. I was looking at it as just something that happened, not as the catastrophy it truly is. Thank you for writing this poem and opening my eyes. You have a great talent. You got my 5. If I could i would make it a 20. Thats how awsome your poem is. Never stop writing. you have a gift. God bless.

Very thoughtful of you to do such a thing...let us just hope for the best...really nice poem btw...fully detailed....touching...im glad to see people like you who make poems like these....try making a prayer out of it next time dude...:D..-hans

The poem is so full of emotion and feeling. it really touched me. i'll be praying for the ppl in the USA.

Beautifully heartbreaking, touching, loved it! keep it up!

Wow! its great. to the point.
loved it!

Jacs
xxx

I also wrote a poem about Katrina.
I was moved emotionally by your poem. I felt the flow and the heart that went into it.
We also had a taste of Katrina in South Florida but we were just the snack before the meal. Thanks for your poem, good job!

Look at it this way-atleast this was a natrual disaster and not caused by some higher powered men sending ppl to destroy others lives...i dont feel bad for them, hell in new orleans i think it cured pleanty of drunks, and those ppl that were poor are all gonna get money and now they get free food and water....the news only shows the bad sh it and takes away from all the ppl and soldiers down there that are helping...nice poem tho
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Wow that was truely beautiful
encore u r a real poet you write from your soul
bravo!!!!!

Thank for the comment and i m fullly recoved from my bell's palsy im so to here bout wht you go. your right looking the bright side helpd and so dose all the support of ur family and friends:) love this poem by the way :)

Great job! It's wonderful that someone is expressing their feelings about Hurricane Katrina through poetry. I'm sure that you're not the only one, but you're the first one I've seen. I'm impressed that you mentioned God in your poem, too... Keep it up!!!!