Awww thats rele sweet bbz ttyl

lv em xxx

Great poem...very touching. keep up the good work. 5/5 :)

* plz try and comment mine too.Thanks

Nice. It reminds me a lot of that poem that compares life to a staircase from a mother to her son...i believe it was by langston hughes...but its still very powerful and original.

~JAKLYNN~

Girl i am wordless...........u have such great talent. this poem is so beautiful

Great poem, i love the concern for the family you have in it.

This was a very good poem! i think it's nice to read something about a mother and daughter relationship because i am very tight with my mom..keep writing and congratulations on winning!

A strong post - lots of hardship and lessons learnt.

Awesome moral and backround but it would be so much better if there were rhyming.

That is a great poem.. it looks like you took alot of time to come up with it.

Great poem, i really loved it, check out Langston Hughs "Mother to Son".
Keep up the good work. You are in good company. I give this effort a 5 !!

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Well there isnt much to say ur obviously a fantastic writer and i fink dat nutin shud stop u from writing dese poems well done!!! :)

I really liked it
it was like really true

Hey gurl u a good poet this shit is so true its like u speakin for eva body keep it upu doint well

Nice

This in an amazing poem you really put your heart in your work

JJ

This poem was touching

That was something special.....

Awesome poem......it made me think of how true it is.....we always cross bridges.....its a inspirational poem....keep on writing you have talent!!!