Comments : Drowning

  • 19 years ago

    by Ryu

    I liked it 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Amber Collins

    Great poem, but might i add something? On the "stop my attempt to hide" I think their should be an "s" after attempt. Over all, I loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    This is beautiful...you are a great poet...now i see why there's a B**** steal your poems...she at this website
    http://www.zenhex.com/poetry.php?poem=147392

  • 19 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey this was just amazing i know how you feel! and it sucks hey! well love your writing stay strong xxx