Comments : One white line

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel

    UR STILL GOOD!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    It was interestin, but in a good way. i think that you had some really good lines and then some line that were not so strong. i think that you have a written a good piece

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    It was interestin, but in a good way. i think that you had some really good lines and then some line that were not so strong. i think that you have a written a good piece