by Fighter (Ariane L.) Aug 31, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I stand in the glass wall, peering at loved ones. |
by +-Unique J-+
WOW -------> that was SO D33p ....Ya got mad lyrics ...chec ..out my 1 poem that i have up right now |
The structure and flow was immaculate, such a brilliantly written poem. |
by ScarletHaze
Brilliant metaphor hun. i love the way you always use them its what gives you your own unique and brilliant style |
by Amanda Bee
Very nice! It's a metaphor for death. And the person is watching as her loved ones cry over her body. Nice job, Fighter...as always:) |
by Pure Silence
W00t*dance* I get it for once! |