by Fighter (Ariane L.) Aug 31, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Darkness invades the sky as black clouds form. |
by Ingrid
This poem was simply amazing, such sadness expressed in such a nice fowing poem! Good job. |
I liked the flow and the third verse was different from the rest - nice twist. |
by Scaleeski
Your poems make me jealous. |
by Laloser05
Wow, another great.. your poems inspire me!! |
by JJ
I was so entranced, I had to read it twice. I love the title it fits perfectly...amazing job, keep up the good work! |