Good, but it was a little shakey. it didnt have much of a flow.

Great poem i loved it seriously great job keep up the good work 5/5

I love the last two stanzas, very well done indeed. Solid content as well, very impressive.

This was a very good poem It was full of tons of emotions, and insperation. I really wish that i could be like this, and just forget everything that happened. i give you a 5.5 for this poem...

ps, to comment back about my dad, if you read my poem "daddys little girl" you will understand what happened. (yes my dad left)

Wow i thought that was a great poem, you did a really good job, keep up the good work, 5/5

It was a good inspirational poem, good wordplay, and emotion. A very solid poem. ^_^x

Great poem. Very truthful & unique. Thanks for your comments on my poetry!
-Kate

Nice one... A great message and a good subject! A really good political statement. Keep writing, will be looking through some of your other work and looking out for anything new.

I love the message this got through however i think you should try a regulated format instead of just random i think youd do well

This was really good although the commas didnt make sence ina few places but thats the only thing i could find wrong...5/5

Now this is what im talking about! the flow was awosme and rhymed so well....good msg behind the words and i just all around loved it 5/5

Its quite difficult to read like the flow and stuff, its got potential but alot of cliches. I dont know its not my favourite.

I really liked this one.... it is really deep and makes u think abt a lot of different things... good job...

kaykay

r/r/c mine 2 plz