by Amanda Bee Aug 31, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Why do I keep on deluding myself? |
Wow it's really really good |
by Little Dot
Great job with this poem. It has a great rhyme shceme and imagery that draws the reader in. Great work on the poem. |
I can so relate to this(only too well).The love, the loss, the need and wanting, the pain, and yes hope can be a double edged sword, well, false hope anyway(which is a horrible limbo to be trapped in, believe me I know).So sad and beautiful yet ending with a bit of determination and a trace of true hope.Excellently written,very touching. |
by Falling Up
O my god... i love this poem... its amazing how u can create such a mood as this , make it flow, and rhyme! wow you are an amazing poet.... i really enjoyed this poem... and it is so very true... its all so stereotypical these days.... ugh.. keep up the good work... i loved it |
by skyfox
I am glad I decided to read more of your work. What a brilliantly innovative piece. Just loved it and totally enjoyed the read. Thankyou for sharing |