Sinful flame

by myxlittlexcut   Sep 1, 2005


Every night
a ritual will start
I'll engulf with fire
my black broken heart

the candles are lit
wax begins to melt
grab a hold of the flame
true pain will be felt

the burning sensation
goes straight to my soul
I've fallen from grace
and now I'll pay the toll

so let the wax drip down
falling upon my skin
allowing each drop
to purge me of my sins

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  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I really like this. I also have read some of your other poems and i really like your work! :) 5/5

    Mallori

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    That was awesome!! u hav grrt abilities and i love ur style. keep writing...thx for the comment..
    love lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    That was really sad, I guess it kinda made me think. Especially about the purging of sins, surely the physical punishment we inflict on ourselves (if we cut) is a sin, yet people are beaten for committing sins... Very good poem.
    Helen

  • 18 years ago

    by Rhonda

    Wow this is another great poem. well done. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Clown

    This is a good poem, I really enjoyed it. Anyways, I was wondering if you could cheack out another poem of mine, called Tainted Love, oh, if you dont remember me, I wrote Razor Blades and Hand Grenades, and cheak out has many of my poems has posible, please. anywho, 5/5, and no Im not a suck up, it was a really good poem. I like the ending, let it purge me of my skin. really powerful writting.

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