by Valentin
You.... are a poet.. a true poet |
This poem is so good and u have an obvious talent, it flows really well and u have used great owrding, keep it up, i love reading ur poems! |
by Gale
That is soo good!!!!!!! wow |
by ReBecca
I remember a time in my youth when i used to burn myself to escape my pain. the thing is, it never really helped. in fact the only thing it did, was leave burn marks on my skin for a few days, and hurt. i commented on this because it reminded me of those days, and i could relate. you write well, and express yourself well with the word usage. good job. |
by Torn
Wow that was so true... |
by k i k i
Wow! That was really powerful, I really enjoyed that. Thanks for your comment, much appreciated. |
by Clown
This is a good poem, I really enjoyed it. Anyways, I was wondering if you could cheack out another poem of mine, called Tainted Love, oh, if you dont remember me, I wrote Razor Blades and Hand Grenades, and cheak out has many of my poems has posible, please. anywho, 5/5, and no Im not a suck up, it was a really good poem. I like the ending, let it purge me of my skin. really powerful writting. |
by Rhonda
Wow this is another great poem. well done. 5/5! |
That was really sad, I guess it kinda made me think. Especially about the purging of sins, surely the physical punishment we inflict on ourselves (if we cut) is a sin, yet people are beaten for committing sins... Very good poem. |
That was awesome!! u hav grrt abilities and i love ur style. keep writing...thx for the comment.. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
I really like this. I also have read some of your other poems and i really like your work! :) 5/5 |