by мσÑιтυÑαм Sep 1, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Theres someone there |
I loved this... i read your stuff all the time, and this one was one of the best... great rhyming, that's usually how i rhyme too... write more, your stuff is great... dark and disturbing, just my taste |
by ari
Woaho, very dark i like it a lot! thanx for the comment, i appreciated it. your poems are also very very good. this one rhymes nicely. |
Really, Really awesome poem! Loved the way you explored a new way of saying things in the poem really cool! ^_^ |
by Wolf
Amazingly Crafted poem,awsome discreptions,i love how you streched the stabbing part into so much great line. |
by lee
Woah, creepy. but tha's what I liked about it. and I liked that part about the crimson liquid trickling down. 5/5 |