I liked this one..good job.

EXCELLENT WRITE....... People will really feel you from this poem.... You can feel your heart pouring.... I don't know if it is so, but I wonder if it was one of those where you're full of emotions so the words pour out perfectly onto your paper.... I love when that happens....(afterward later later when I feel a little better... only cause my poem turns out just the way I like it) =)

I would like to tell u ..it hard for me to say some one is a good poet unless he /or she is really a poet..well i am so impressed about ur poetry and i read all ur poems..i am sure one day u will be among those great poets //just keep the good work and wish u all the luck
munir mezyed

That's so good! "pretty mess" hey, that rings a bell, but arms are too difficult to hide... Sorry, back to the poem, I really like the emotion in there, it's truly palpable, and the imagery is, you can't really say beautiful without admitting to sadism, but perfect, so true. Thanks for your comment on my poem! 5/5
Helen

Wow, this one was long, but worth every word. great job!

Woh! it was a really awesome poem it was worth reading it all the way! You really have talent and every poem so far that i've read from you has been great! Keep it up! ^_^ It held alot of emotions, sad, but still a great write!