Excellent!!! short, yet very well written, as always. keep it up!
-xXx-

Very nicely written, I loved it.
Defiantly a 5/5 none to less.

Keep writing and take care xx:

*> : PainOfOne

It's a real talent that you have-- it is very difficult to write your feelings in such short lines yet make the reader feel it.... i felt it right to my heart.... great poem..... *silence* i don't know why i just love that word....

Love,
Ipsita

Short, Simple, Simply nice.