by Unrequited Sep 1, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
As death creeps inside of me |
I love the ending part. I also love how ur rhymes are always obvious...which is great...because that means you can take words and make them have feeling, with out rhyming. and dats true poetry. |
I see a pattern here, and it works for you! you made a new fan! |
Beautiful...another love poem I see...just come to you? |
by Weeping Wolf
Excellent poem! they r always great when i read them, and sometimes we all wonder whats worth dying for... |
by EpithetPoet
Wow... i hope one day i can feel like this. nice poem. |