Wow... i hope one day i can feel like this. nice poem.
-A

Excellent poem! they r always great when i read them, and sometimes we all wonder whats worth dying for...

Beautiful...another love poem I see...just come to you?
I reaaally hope you like my poem, "Unrequited For Now."

Take care of yourself ;)

xxx

I see a pattern here, and it works for you! you made a new fan!

I love the ending part. I also love how ur rhymes are always obvious...which is great...because that means you can take words and make them have feeling, with out rhyming. and dats true poetry.