by Marta Sep 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Everyday the misery seems to deepen further into my skin. It almost seems like it's already screaming, you can't win. |
That was an amazing poem i can relate to every feeling that u have spoken about...I love the format of this poem, and both rhythem and rhyme were fantastic! keep up the good work |
I love it... miss misery...how sad, but very well done. |
by Melanie
This poem is really good its very original i can totally relate but i have to say you do have better ones i love your poems your in my favorate good job and keep writting |
by Lu
I really liked it alot .expecially the part |
by Georgi
Omg i really liked that! its very discriptive and kinda channels all your feelings into one. i especially liked this bit |