Just wanna let you know know that I love this poem...just the ending was kinda different but its a great poem! Take care and God bless! :-)

Don't listen to Kelsey. THe ending was not crap. A poem in itself is not crap. It happens to the best of us. Your not writing to impress people anyway you write for you. Anyway I loved this poem. I haven't had a first kiss but when the damn comes I hope nothing goes wrong! Don't give up hope in someone, but a lost love means a better one is to come! Hope everything works out! Goreous poem!
~CHelsey~